In yesterday's post "My Shadow", I tried to compare one's life with a shadow. Though I had the basic idea, I couldn't bring them to life in the poem.This is another modification of the same theme "Shadow".
Together with me he transversed
in lifes' ups and downs.
Never left me alone in the crowd
though the world deserted me.
Together we stood, united for ever.
Together in death stood we tied.
The other side of I, he is
My unique possession, my shadow he is.
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Nice one Shravan. I think it's better than your previous attempt. Short and Sweet.Liked it.
Have a great time :)
thank you for dropping in Manivannan.. glad that you liked this.
have a fantastic evening.:)
thats a great attempt, really liked it! :)
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