I fell off, from the crystal cliff of my heart, and
The shattered pieces of glass cut deeper into my skin
They made me bleed, bleed and bleed for long,
And, all my dreams now shattered and killed
I feel the wind, blowing into my nakedness.
I know, the absence of you will be forever
But you will always remain in my heart.
Your presence shall be felt, with every wind passing by
In all my thoughts, you will be kept safe,
Even when destiny draws to destination..
Dedicated to all those people with a broken heart.
PS : Nothing Personal [Scheduled Post Again]
skip to main |
skip to sidebar
Experiments with Words
Posted by
Penciling template by Eternal Thinker
All rights reserved Monochrome by Shravan
15 Shared Thoughts:
loved it loved it.. i keep saying it..my most favorite of the poems are all sad ones.. you write really well Shravan.. kudos!
Loved it for its love..
So you haven't lost touch with words, need anymore proof?
A poem well-composed with a lot of feelings.
Take care, Shravan.
The present layout of your blog is really beautiful.
May love heal all broken hearts. Amen.
Man..... Dont write so many painful poems.....
Its a very realistic picture of what a broken heart goes through..
So it was ur scheduled post...i would give a try....
I wrote the tag u were waiting for...:P
Cheers..
Wonderful words! Makes a lot of sense!
very poignant, shravan (this is a scheduled comment)
@ Kajal
glad that you loved it.. and thanks. and same pinch there.. slow melodies and sad songs are that i also listen to
@ Hazna
loved the comment:) if you are satisfied i am satisfied. if u need no proof why i bother :D
@ Ayesha
so so so glad to see you around after days ayesha.. and thanks for the appreciation.
the layout has been the same for long now..seems like you missed the view :D
Amen
@ Mahesh
sadness is my all time favourite topic.. i saw the tag and well done :) cheers dude!!
@ Rakesh bhai
thank you for the appreciation brother.. i love it when you comment :)
@ Amritorupa
lolz :D
i was waiting for the word "poignant" to be written here :D
it took only 5 minutes to write this one up, and it took 3 days for me to respond to its comments :(
dear shree,
then it's not abroken heart.you can still feel the precious presence and smell the fragrance!
the memories are enough to inspire you or be bold enough to get up and walk.............
we never ask the reason why do they break our hearts.may be for your bright future,otherwise you will not agree!
try to know what is behind the picture!
get out of emotions!well expressed!
sasneham,
anu
@ Anupama
:D it was nothing personal :D but i loved what you said :)
Post a Comment
agree... disagree... like... love... hate... what ever you feel, have your say.. your comments are always welcome, and much valued