Eternal... By Slow Processor.
This blogger is from Mysore, who has the poetic ability and i love her works. and this post comes as a celebration post, following the 555 days of existance in the blog world.
I have no face
Nor you have one
I am a deep sigh
You - a warm touch
Choking a tune of pain
Sat our life
On an ailing bed…
Then came a bouquet of love
I’m your shade
Waiting outside a dream
All stories are the same
In the busy street of life
we could never meet
for, I have no face
Nor you have one
Death never take lives..
Taken away are our masks
it is light ever after
For our souls
alive or not,
All stories are the same!
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Lovely Lovely Lovely... !!!!! Loved it.....!
beautiful poem
Thank u so much dear Shravan..
Thank u KP..
Thanks sindhuchechi..
An interesting take on life itself!
How true and so beautifully said,Fatima.
Thanks Shravan
"Death never take lives..
Taken away are our masks"
i loved these liness.. and true it seem to me.. i wanted to be the first one to comment.. but i wasnt home.. scheduled this post before i left homw following the works.
hasna, loved the poem !
and thank you for accepting my invitation and sen'ing me this beautiful piece of work
WOW! That's very beautiful...'All stories are the same' - Very True!
Well written fathima :-)
hey everything is different... a good post... good lines hazna..
:D
Keep blogging shravan.. all the best for your 555th day ;)
wow this was great..
I'm loving it
I am a confused girl blabbering about life ..i am still in a process of learning and you can see it in the confused words..
I am happy that all of you loved these lines..
Thanks a lot Shravan..
Thanks Rakesh, Lakshmi,Manivannan,Remis and sudheesh..
Lovely lines on mortality and the universal nature of human existence.... Good work, slow processor! And thanx, shravan, for introducing me to a budding poet thru ur guest post section :)
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