alone, i started my journey
took so long for you to come
yet, i don't remember when,
you came, held my hands.
hastened us, together
the route, so isolated
the shades, the rains
the lights, and the winds.
a new horizon seen,
one day; a new break.
new world, new people,
new places, and new life.
my destination, yet not reached
you, thought, your did.
left me alone, and you walked,
to the new sun rise seen..
all alone, i pursue my journey
many come, many leave,
yet, me all alone, transverse.
knowing not, its to divinity.
you came, you left,
two drops of tear, i shed.
no time for me to mourn
nor do you deserve that..
all alone did i begin..
all alone shall i end..
took so long for you to come
yet, i don't remember when,
you came, held my hands.
hastened us, together
the route, so isolated
the shades, the rains
the lights, and the winds.
a new horizon seen,
one day; a new break.
new world, new people,
new places, and new life.
my destination, yet not reached
you, thought, your did.
left me alone, and you walked,
to the new sun rise seen..
all alone, i pursue my journey
many come, many leave,
yet, me all alone, transverse.
knowing not, its to divinity.
you came, you left,
two drops of tear, i shed.
no time for me to mourn
nor do you deserve that..
all alone did i begin..
all alone shall i end..
and happy birthday nikhil, or as we all call, kuttan.. turning 16, and may you live for long, and may you fall in love, and break your heart once, to know, what love is and may all your dreams come true. God Bless You dear brother.. love ya :)
oh, i forgot to say about my day, nothing great.. had class till noon, had lunch from the hotel, precisely, Indian Coffee House, and realized how worse a place is that to have food.. you dont even clean the glasses you serve.. and the place smells bloody so foul..
Geetz, i have heard your words for a poem.. here is all that i could do.. i hope you like it. and its dedicated to you :)
posts i liked for the day : [Jinju's] [Ayesha's] [Slow Processor's]
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a new horizon seen,
one day; a new break.
new world, new people,
new places, and new life.
the NEW's because its all new :)
all alone, i pursue my journey
many come, many leave,
you came, you left,
two drops of tear, i shed.
no time for me to mourn
nor do you deserve that..
Beautiful lines shravan
one of the recent best from your store.
good night and that special snows..
have a nice day 2moro..
yet another work tht makes me remain,a lil more stronger as ur lil big fan of ur poems... thankuuuuuuuuuu... :)
you came, you left,
two drops of tear, i shed.
no time for me to mourn
nor do you deserve that..
all alone did i begin..
all alone shall i end..
liked tht...
dear shravan,
touching lines.....good work.
it's always better to make oneself the best friend.expectations lead to disappointments.when love is unconditional,it has long life.what's destined will be ours;the rest we have to leave behind.
so,cheer up!you've to go a long way!if you deserve the love,it will search you.
happy birthday to nikhil! A BIG GOD BLESS YOU!
i will share one sms i received today.
don't be disappointed if world refused to help you.remember the words of Einstein.
''i'm thankful to all those who said no,it's because of them i did it myself''.
so say thanks,to those who left you.
sasneham,
anu
wow :):)....
@ Slow Processor
I knew that you would say this.. but dear, I must thank you.. because without you saying your opinion on the first four lines I previewed to you, I wouldn’t have written this.. thanks and I am so glad that you liked it. And yes, I felt soo good writing this.
@ Geetz
:) I liked that comment Geetz.. and I am happy that you liked this work :)
@ Anupama
Thanks and I liked the comment, but I liked to tell you this, this is nothing personal. And the sms, I read it much before.. and nikhil did have a great day.
@ Zenana
Wow!! you are back !!! :D :P smiles :)
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