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Shades

Rhyming to Hasna's recent update in my own ways.. read her try here.

turn around for once
nothing to be lost then
turn around for just once
see there, in the shades,
a mom's joy, a dad's pride
a sister's love,and her heart,
a piece of you, yet to alter,
the real soul of you,
surviving in that broken piece.

P S : this post is a dedication to a wonderful person in my life, sheetal chechi, for being the real she always, for not wearing a mask on her face. Dear chechi, i love you.
P P S : guess title has nothing to do with the post.

17 Shared Thoughts:

abc said...

I hv absolutly no idea n m still clueless as 2wt in me made u dedicate dese lines fr me..
m surprised...shocked..overwhelmed..touched..n a lot more...m confused wid my mixed emotions..bt den,al i cn say is...
..the feeling is too gr8 & special 2 b expressed in mere words or acts..

SO THX AGAIN BRO...FR BEING D PRSN U R 2 ME..!!
GOD BLESS..!!
lOTS OF HUGS,LUV & PRAYERS

Manivannan Sadasivam said...

Nice try shravan...liked it!

Just commented on Hasna's poem, and came here :-)

Cheers!

Leo said...

wow.. very nice lines Shravan! :D

..Rugma.. said...

hmmm....again,...good poem!!!:D good lines!!!
take care...
Rugma...

cALviN::കാല്‍‌വിന്‍ said...

guD one

Shravan RN said...

@ Sheetal chechi
:) i sair right? for being the real you always. for having no masks put on your face.. for being there for me
for all the love and care.. hugs in return.. love you :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Mani
cheers :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Leo
:) oh boy.. look at me smile.. see who is appreciating.. leo saheb.. thanks chettaa :) :P

Shravan RN said...

@ Rugma
hmm.. again, thank you.. :D

Shravan RN said...

@ Hasna
:) :) welcome Hasna.. and why jealous? and what is there to decide about the dedication? its for my chechi :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Calvin
thank you sir ji.. :)

lakshmi said...

this is a cute one Shravan

VOICE OF THE UNKNOWN said...

applause... applause..
so sweet..
keep up the good work!! :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Lakshmi akka
:) thank you ji..

Shravan RN said...

@ Voice Of The Unknown
smiles.. smiles..
and thanks :)

SatyU said...

Wow. beautiful lines :)

Takecare

Shravan RN said...

@ Satyu
hey thats a new name here.. welcome and thanks :)

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