many miles to go before the hault,
moving past the isolated lanes,
and through the crowded stations,
the journey goes on, and on !
often so filled with no space,
like my mind thats lost in thoughts,
and often so abandoned, isolated,
like me, longing for all your love !
who knows when its time,
for you to come, or may be not.
like the waves i count in despiar,
the wait for you, goes on, and on !
Image : Chirakkal Raliway Station on a Sunday Evening.
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15 Shared Thoughts:
Whoaaa! This is straight outta the heart!
And a brilliant picture to go along with it! Somehow trains have held immense significance in my life, and continue to do so ;)
aha!! feb in near and luv is in the air!! :P
Nice one.Does the long and empty street signify the undue wait?
You hv captured the scene so well
wow...superb!!...gr8!!....specially d second stanza!!
woooow! Awesome shravan
loved it! ^_^
take care.
@ V Rakesh
yup, straight out of my heart :-) and the picture just came good :)
@ Sawan
hmm :-) its in the air always :-) i just caught a handful this time :)
@ K P Sir
may be the platform signifies the undue wait :-) and thanks for liking the picture :)
@ Sakhi
thank you sakhi :)
@ Shriti
:) thanks.. and thanks for the tweet :-)
nannayittundu.. !
hey that pic is also nice.. did u take it?
@ SB
thank you ji, and yup, that pic is from my mob :)
Loved the pic and the poem too.
very well written.:)
@ Sneha
:) thanks.. this piece made me feel like, omg ! am back lol :)
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