move on, they tell me every moment
and i see the world moving by
move on, they tell me every moment
and i see faces, known and unknown
moments grew to hours, and to days
colors faded and grey on my hair
looking back, i could only see
a shadow, that never was mine
was i moving on in life, or,
was i just standing still,
waiting for a moment that went by
or searching for a hope to hold on?
and i see the world moving by
move on, they tell me every moment
and i see faces, known and unknown
moments grew to hours, and to days
colors faded and grey on my hair
looking back, i could only see
a shadow, that never was mine
was i moving on in life, or,
was i just standing still,
waiting for a moment that went by
or searching for a hope to hold on?
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Hmmm, nice1 i liked it!!! specially whn u said "looking back, i could only see a shadow, that was never mine." Live the present dude!!!!
well world is moving on a great pace... but v should have our own speed. remember only a dead fish goes with the flow!!!!
cheers!!!!
Suffering and happiness never separate their hands..they walk 2gether..
SO, its better to stop waiting for the sad days to be over to start being happy...
i loved ur poem..
@ Shrijit
living it the present, thats what we all do mate. but that doesnt mean we have to forget the past :) past is from where the experience come to us all and yeah, the world is moving on a great pace and we got to catch up :)
cheers :-)
@ Hasna
suffering and happiness, i guess are the two sides of a single coin, and so said sis, its better to move on :) and am happy happy happy that you loved it :)
got the theme for this one from your last update :) so did the previous one :)
Nice verse....
MAGICAL WORDS ESPECIALLY "was i moving on in life, or,
was i just standing still,"Everyone thinks like this in some sectors of life.....(Me too)
All the Best!
@ Neeya
thank you for the comment dear :) and oh boy oh boy am flatter ! its not magical and call, its a universal fact, like you said, everyone thinks the same way, one moment or the other in their loves :) thanks again !
wow twin! dat was brilliant! proud of u! :)
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