When I die
there will be a bright sun, cold breeze,
and then a full moon
and the stars will glitter..
there will be no tears around,
no laments around and no curses
i will die the death
that you'll hardy guess
and when i die
bury me not, burn me,
and leave no traces of me..
for i want not to be me,
when i am born again.
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Nice poem.Why such melancholy subject,Shravan.
i didnt write that one as a poem, see i tagged it under thoughts.. thats just another wish of mine sir :) no no meloncholy thoughts :) just for some changes
death!!!well.i think our thoughts are so much embedded in death!!!..as if nothing else matters in life..why so much concern for a silly death when our poor thoughts crave for life :)..
anyways:),that is a good post :)
zen
Why wait till death shravan, you have every opportunity and chance to be born again, in this very life :-)
Anyway, thinking about death will bring a change in the way we approach life. So its a good post friend!
Have a good day :-)
Young man, death is among the last things that should be on ur mind, considering that life is still to live and achieve, if not anything, the many more girlfriends to come! ;)
Good write!
:( verryyyyyyyyyyyy sad :(
Beautiful... You will be you, even when you are born again. It is just that your name and earthly identity will be different.
Or, you will not be born again in this world..but move on somewhere else...But, you will always be you :)
With those 100 things you made me smile.. all thru it.. i liked your honesty.. Honesty not always offend.. just at times.. but yours was very cute.. now u are back with a sad subject.. i liked your poem.. the sad mood is just the mood.. lets hope it changes to happy soon!! All the best! :)
Very Beautiful (sob) :'(
Change the title to When I Die..:P
So much pain in the poem.....
Write some happy poems sometime.. Would like to see that side of you once..
See you around..
Cheers
Blessings....
hmmmmm.....interesting although when you die you would know not what the sun, nor moon, nor breeze, nor stars are doing.
Very nicely done....
Have a fabulous weekend
@ Zenana
Welcome back dudette, wazzup with you? I know everything else matters, but still cant keep myself away from thinking :D
@ Manivannan
Nice thought Mani. Yeah, I agree, thinking of death will bring in a change about the way we think
@ Rakesh bhai
Yeah Yeah, many girl friends to come death got the last prio only bro.. just some random thoughts and thank you
@ Kajal Chechi
You can smile.. and I hope its not that sad now :))
@ Ayesha
Yeah, the earthly identity matters, and I hope that the family and relationship identities will also alter.. yeah. Who will be born as the same next life, or will there be one as human? Nice thoughts ayesha, n thanks
@ SB
I know now you are offended with the sad theme.. will divert soon, and thanks about the 100 things.. and yeah, its just a mood :)) smiles now :))
@ Choco
:)) welcome choco and thanks for the comment.. now smile :))
@ Mahesh
Lolz Mahesh, it seems like everyone want to see the other side of Shravan. Accepted, and you will have your wish gran’ed.. see you around..
@ Rhapsody
Namasthe.. the rain the sun the moon the breeze the stars and the rest are to keep those people happy, who cared for me.. just that they will forget my absence and enjoy it nature’s gift.. after all that’s the only thing I can wish for them
You too have a blessed and fun filled week end.
@ Mahesh
caption, a surprise :D
you must have gone through Julius Caesar ha?
I was just reminded the text…
@ Deeps
no Deeps, no, i didnt, am keeping myself away from books :)
PS: no library access :D
I really like the way you did it..pretty good,mate!
I wish we did die a death like tht!
@ Crystal
good evening :) and welcome..:) and i will pray that we die such a death, but not now, after living life to its fulth.. and thanks.. hope to see you around.
shravan
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